I just posted the second draft of my book. This incorporates items from my "to do" list. It does not yet include any changes from the review team. Reviewers may switch to this version if they wish (just indicate that you are reviewing version 09.08 of the book) but may also continue with the first draft. The changes in this version are not extensive but it should read a little better. A few new items were added, and the table of contents now provides links to the individual chapters making navigation somewhat easier. Enjoy!
The new PDF is named TLCL-09.08.pdf and is available here.